To Javon:
Tuesday, April 12, 2011
HW 44 - Comments on Other People's Projects
Javon Lloyd Perry, i really enjoyed reading your choice of project. your interest in abortions and the role in plays in women's lives in the United State truly shows. since abortions wasnt a topic that was really touched upon during class. i valued your research because you looked at an experts point of view of abortion, and tuned in to the emotional toll it had on her. by initally doing research on the topic and interview someone who experienced it. your project engaged me because abortions is something that is pretty common to my ear, and it is a touchy and great debatable action. i think you couldve furthered your project by maybe interviewing another individual, maybe even a male figure. see how the two differ
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I think the detail in which you evaluated other peoples projects demonstrates you examined them closely. I would just get more specific about ways they can improve however i liked that you related it to what you have/ have not done.
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