HW 31 - Comments 3

From Nelson S.( Older): didnt post

From Chris(younger):
This blog was very profound to read. I understand that this topic hits close to home and must be emotional. I thought that you supported your ideas best by connecting to how you felt about someday possibly being ill as well. This really stood out to me and made me think more deeply about the issue and how the thought of death can affect someone as well as those close to them
To Johny: Johny this was a very good post. you attacked and showed relation between what we have studied and the task or project you were taking up. i think your thoughts and what you talk about are relevant. but just like myself. post needs to be looked over and critiqued more than whats thought.the line that Arden shows sticks out to me as well. "This is clearly a violation of everyone being treated the same while being sought medical attention." this is because our system is so called "for the people" but according to our American health care and the way our country is ran shows otherwise.

To Sharif :your motives, your desires, your perseverance and everything that comes with a persons persona must be positive during a tragic time. this clearly shows in your blog. you shouldnt let something eat away at you until it has taken its full supplement. life is hard and death is harder.you show this with the emotional toll you noticed during the interview of your grandmother. I feel your blog can be much stronger if you tackle more aspects of the way a person acts who is dying vs. the way society wants them to. are they similar, different? Is it the illness and that person resentment that's beats them? who usually wins the competition between death and a person?

Regarding Elevator Speeches

To Bryanna:  i felt your project was a great and amazing idea. it shows the way a persons mood and way of going about dieing can either be a negative or a positive. the someone you talked on who meditates and who is more independent with dealing with the disease has lived a better or longer life that that other who didn't. this shows the psychological impact of a tragic experience like death. people all act differently and this shows through experience, even ones that are tragic. strong presentation dont remember any critiquing.but i was truly hoping to read your blog. i was hoping to get more insight of the different processes and ways those individuals went about dying and how they differ. hopeful you post it soon

To Devin: your project by itself and the research you got was phenomenal. your presentation showed the basics of your project and what you wanted to learn.you created analysis through statistical survey on living wills and euthanasia from experts. i think your presentation could have been stronger if you were more confident and mentally prepared. you had a great blog post, great project but your elevator speech wasnt as strong because of the presenting aspects. good job man