Fast food is so successful because it’s the most convenient for many. The word "Fast" is what’s appealing to because time is precious. The amount of fast food restaurants around us make it popular and people become more and more influenced by it everyday. The visualizations and the advertisements that come from fast food attract people. you don’t tell individuals exactly what there eating which many should pay attention to more but instead just use there efforts to put good looking and tasteful food for a cheap price. Than you have the green market which will advertise and promote theirs foods in a total different way. By having samples for the consumers and giving them a menu that’s made for people to read something that many in fast-food restaurants don’t do. It gives you every single thing about that food, like its daily supply of nutrients and all this runs by your eye before you hit the register.
Everyone knows that Fast Food is not the healthiest of foods but still so hard to say no to it. Adding bacon to a cheeseburger would result in more buyers at this isn’t surprising. The average American would be hypnotized by an image like that, not caring about where it comes from or the unhealthiness of it just the taste. McDonalds and other fast food restaurants are now forced to put the calorie totals on food menus because of the problem of obesity. Even with this I and everyone else are following the "American tradition". Green market is for the purpose of reaching out and helping out. It gives off a new fresh type of energy and McDonalds is the usual. Green market represents using the environment in a positive way and helping those who live in it.
Everyone knows that Fast Food is not the healthiest of foods but still so hard to say no to it. Adding bacon to a cheeseburger would result in more buyers at this isn’t surprising. The average American would be hypnotized by an image like that, not caring about where it comes from or the unhealthiness of it just the taste. McDonalds and other fast food restaurants are now forced to put the calorie totals on food menus because of the problem of obesity. Even with this I and everyone else are following the "American tradition". Green market is for the purpose of reaching out and helping out. It gives off a new fresh type of energy and McDonalds is the usual. Green market represents using the environment in a positive way and helping those who live in it.
Tamiko,
ReplyDeleteYou could increase both the depth and clarity of these posts.
For instance, "Adding bacon to a cheeseburger would result in more buyers at this isn’t surprising." This sentence doesn't read well, it needs a couple tweaks. And you don't manage to successfully elaborate what it is about the combination of bacon and beef that makes it so successful, or so unhealthy. Describe taste, texture, moisture, smell, color, historical connections, etc. Show more than you tell - don't just say "average American hypnotized" - show us why that works. Who came up with it? Don't they also sell bacon at the greenmarket? Isn't bacon a traditional US food? Look at contradictions, connections, etc.
As stated in syllabus, and in class, I recommend you make a second draft to fix errors and sharpen insight.